View Full Version : Please review, all comments welcome

08-21-2005, 09:25 PM
please review my site, any comments/suggestions welcome;

what do u think to;


the link (http://www.dwsystems.net)

cheers :)

08-22-2005, 01:14 AM
I like it. The look of it seems to fit what it is very well.

some small notes if I may.

1)the validator logo in the bottom left looks out of place. Since the colors on it do nothing with the colors of your site it sticks out like a sore thumb. Maybe redisgn it and move it to the bottom of your left column?

2) i think you need a bit of space on the block that starts with the "home users" heading. it's real close to the grey border of the block above it. the 2 blocks above it seem to have som 10-15px margin on them. maybe the same here will look better.

3) the image of the guy on the lap top needs to be moved so that it sits on the bottom pf that block. since it has a sharp flat bottom edge to it it looks odd up that high.

4) i'd personally tone down the drop shadow on the logo and make it dark green rather than black. since the shadow is being cast on a green background the shadow wouldn't be black anyways.

all i all I like it. I liked the last one as well. the whole overlaying 'stripes' thing you pull of rather well.

08-22-2005, 02:52 PM
all comments taken on board, and some great advice that i would not have thought of.

val logo will be aligned as u suggested, i think i will make logo match the background, as alot of peeps seem to do.
i will apply this spacing
yes the image floats in the middle of nowhere
I would never have thought of that, logo drop shadow will be changed

thanks HARBINGEROTV, I appreciate the help! :)

p.s just need the client to add decent content now!, any more commets would be greatly appreciated!