View Full Version : Please review my website

Angela Brown488
03-15-2009, 12:03 PM
Thanks all for this great forum that allows us all have a glimpse of what people think of our sites and blogs.....
Please review my website, and waiting for your comments...
the Home Page (http://egyptopia.com)
And i'd appreciate any advice from experts about increasing traffic this new site, if possible
Any feedback, evaluation, suggestion is greatly appreciated! And multiple thanks in advance...!!!:thumbsup:

Philip M
03-15-2009, 02:48 PM
Pretty good in many ways, with lots of interesting information.

But check spelling carefully - I noticed photgraphies weddeing mithogical beautyful Ocatvious icredible all on the first page.

Poor spelling, grammar and punctuation will put a lot of customers off.

A very personal view is that I am put off by links to things like Make Money On Line, Russell Grant Psychics and Popular Acia Berries. Swarms of this sort of thing are deleted from my mailbox as spam every day. I believe them to be scams, designed to part the credulous from their money. So (to me) they taint or contaminate your site, and hint that you also may be more interested in parting people from their money than offering honest products/services at honest prices. Hence I would rather seek another merchant.

03-15-2009, 03:38 PM
You need a footer. Very definitely. I thought your site was incomplete. Also, you're asking for too much real estate from the browser when your site doesn't even take up that much room.

03-21-2009, 11:37 PM
I agree with the statement of you needing a footer. It will just round it off better.