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  1. #1
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    Please review my site

    I am an amatuer web developer and made this site as practice. I am trying to get better at design but my coding skills are very good IMO.

    http://felix.avalanchestudios.net/

    Please tell me what you think. I offer free layouts and soon free scripts!

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    simple but clean. i don't much care for the menu, however that is a personal opinion and would not (if i was to ever want to visit your site again) stop me from doing so.

    with that said,
    i like the general layout. If I were you I would work on that image in the top left, kinda makes the site look amature, and if you are trying to get traffic you will want a good professional looking site. but other than that good layout.

    also, i would (if i were you) put the donate button at the bottom under the legal mumbo jumbo. if users are going to donate that means they've been and used many scripts or layouts. so they will most likely have seen the button. however users who are new to the site might see it as a bit forward. just my opinion.

    good work
    public string ConjunctionJunction(string words, string phrases, string clauses)
    {
    return (String)(words + phrases + clauses);
    }
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    Boxy

    Coding's looking good (just glanced over it quickly); the design however is rather plain and the layout boxy.
    There's no real focal element the tells the visitor where the heck (s)he ended up this time; think about a header with the site title. Try and alleviate the boxiness by getting rid of the hard CSS borders and get creative with background imagery for a somewhat softer effect.
    Regards,
    Ronald.
    ronaldvanderwijden.com


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