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    Regular Coder nomanic's Avatar
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    could you critisize this site please?

    hi

    marketplace, still under construction, mostly functioning

    http://www.nomanic.biz/product/Moomin_Family_Mug.html

    started it last december, its been on a back burner ever since

    grateful for feedback
    <DmncAtrny> I will write on a huge cement block "BY ACCEPTING THIS BRICK THROUGH YOUR WINDOW, YOU ACCEPT IT AS IS AND AGREE TO MY DISCLAIMER OF ALL WARRANTIES, EXPRESS OR IMPLIED, AS WELL AS DISCLAIMERS OF ALL LIABILITY, DIRECT, INDIRECT, CONSEQUENTIAL OR INCIDENTAL, THAT MAY ARISE FROM THE INSTALLATION OF THIS BRICK INTO YOUR BUILDING."
    <DmncAtrny> And then hurl it through the window of a Sony officer
    <DmncAtrny> and run like hell

    Portfolio, Tutorials - http://www.nomanic.biz/

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    Looks good so far, however theres a few thing I would change.

    It all seems a bit messy and you dont really know where to look first.

    I would drop down the navigation bar section beneath the logo and if possible make the logo a bit bigger so it seems a bit more spaced out. I would do the same with the search bar.

    I would move the login bars over to the right and bring them together with the "forgotten password" text as this is the first place you realise you have forgotten your password and you want your visitor to feel as though your site is easy to use and navigate.

    This picture seems to be a little too big compared to the amount of text on the right, I would make the picture a little smaller which will then also bring in the "related products" into the browser without having to scroll down which I think will be really useful.

    The sharing icons seem to have just been plonked randomly in the middle and dont really have any order to them. I would have the item description and specs nearer the top and then the sharing icons placed in the blank space beneath the related items part and to the left of the customer reviews.

    Hope thats helpful

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    I asked for critisism! Why I asked, I appreciate your thoughts, thankyou

    if you click on the community link, it shows the extended header, bigger logo.

    The picture was messed with many times before it reached that size, the picture and title are the stars in this, should both be big

    I totally agree with what you say about the social icons though, I'll change that

    Thankyou codeseeker!
    <DmncAtrny> I will write on a huge cement block "BY ACCEPTING THIS BRICK THROUGH YOUR WINDOW, YOU ACCEPT IT AS IS AND AGREE TO MY DISCLAIMER OF ALL WARRANTIES, EXPRESS OR IMPLIED, AS WELL AS DISCLAIMERS OF ALL LIABILITY, DIRECT, INDIRECT, CONSEQUENTIAL OR INCIDENTAL, THAT MAY ARISE FROM THE INSTALLATION OF THIS BRICK INTO YOUR BUILDING."
    <DmncAtrny> And then hurl it through the window of a Sony officer
    <DmncAtrny> and run like hell

    Portfolio, Tutorials - http://www.nomanic.biz/

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    I really like it a lot, have you seen the @font-face kits over at fontsquirrel.com? I think you could find a really good san-sarif there that would add a little bit to the content presentation instead of the plain ones like arial, verdana, etc other than the plain text I think you did a very good job!

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    I like the dog face and the site looks pretty good so far.

    I need for you to build more before I can give a more detail review.

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