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    My Web App

    Hi there all,

    Long time since I've been on here. I'm developing a web app at the moment called lushcloud. You can find it at...

    http://www.lushcloud.com

    There is alot that still needs to be done. Its a temp logo at the moment by the way.

    Let me know what you think of the landing page, and some of the screenshots.

    I have 50 beta testers signed up for testing so far.

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    I like the color scheme, and design... the name though... the definition of a lush to me is an alcoholic, usually a young female one. Maybe that's just a cultural thing. I guess salesforce.com was already taken eh

    I could get around the name vagueness if the "what is it" blurb gave me a clearer picture of what it is. "General Inquiry System" is way too nebulous... I really think you need the term "CRM" or even spell it out, "Customer Relationship Mgmt", somewhere. Actually that small line of text beginning with "lushcloud makes it easy to...", that's what should be in the "what is it" box.

    Oh and the failure path on the beta login needs work.

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    I can barely read the text. I think the background should be white, or the text darker--even better, both.

    I think you're jumping the gun putting "interested" so far forward. I don't know what it is yet! This is because there's practically no content on your page. I'm still only left with a vague idea of your product. You need more descriptive copy.

    @Fumigator: US-only dialectal form.

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    Nice design, like the colours, do you have a UI for the product/ service you are offering? if so maybe put the log in line with the "what is it" text and to the left a screen shot of the user area (people more inquizative as to find out whats inside there)

    text needs left aligning and to be half the page not all the way across, (statistics say that anything more then 16 words per line the user looses interest)
    id chagethe text to the same colour as the answer customer questions & perfect tool section and change them 2 sections to the deep red, tha'd would maintain continuity and sand out more too, and yea.....generaly flesh out your written content so we know what the hell it is we are buying

    Dan
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    Do you think I should add the option to pay both monthly and yearly?

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    yea, people might be more inclined to pay yearly at a reduced fee
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    In my opinion. The logo is too small to recognize. Is it a box or a folder? Is it a cloud? This is just my opinion.
    Last edited by WA; 01-05-2010 at 08:25 PM.

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    im inclined to agree with this statment

    Quote Originally Posted by onejab View Post
    In my opinion. The logo is too small to recognize. Is it a box or a folder? Is it a cloud? This is just my opinion.
    Last edited by Apostropartheid; 01-11-2010 at 09:11 PM.
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    I think i'm going to rename the app because lushcloud is a name that doesn't make sense.

    I'm going to rename the app "Authentic".

    Here is the new interface for the app...

    http://dl.dropbox.com/u/805604/newinterface.png

    Tell me your thought's?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Andy92 View Post
    I think i'm going to rename the app because lushcloud is a name that doesn't make sense.

    I'm going to rename the app "Authentic".

    Here is the new interface for the app...

    http://dl.dropbox.com/u/805604/newinterface.png

    Tell me your thought's?
    would it not be easier to have a list of generic questions rather then a comment area? that way you dont need to answer the same question 200 times, and just have an email account set up for "other" questions a potential customer may ask ?

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    That's a great idea!

    Well I will release the first version of the app, and then I will be always adding new things to it and making it better.

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    glad to see people are helping and hope the project works out for you


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