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    My Web Design Website

    http://evision-it.co.uk/test/index.php

    thats the only page i have constructed so far!
    whats you +/-'s feedback would be nice

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    I think it needs a more contrasting color. Web 2.0 is meant to be dark but I think its too dark. Your grammar needs some work. For example in your first paragraph you have this
    whether your a UK citizen or your international,
    It should be you're or you are instead of your but even then international used to address a person doesn't sound right.

    Your logo could use some work. It doesn't stand out to me. It also has this darker gray shading that contrasts with the background color of the header area.
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    im not much of a designer, thats my mates aspect, he will work on the logo, i just needed something to stick in there!

    what other colour do you suggest for the theme?
    gray, white and .......


    Thanks for you feedback, much appreciated!

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    Could not you manage to get a better domain name for your web design website ?

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    well whats your idea's of what it should be called?

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    I would also recommend some different colors, a logo with some graphic in it, and some more graphics overall on the page.

    As for colors, my favorite site is http://colorschemedesigner.com/. Just put in the colors you have now (or new ones) and it gives you some others that match.

    Some ideas for the logo: Come up with some abstract image to go to the right of the text or behind the text maybe?

    And for additional graphics, maybe put in more web sites that you have designed or other images related to web design or hosting.

    Anyway, those are just my suggestions off the top of my head!

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    yeah on the other pages their will be more images to do with related services.

    my mate will work on the logo as im a coder not much of a designer!

    when i get home, i'll upload an edit version


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