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    Succeed Services

    http://www.succeedservices.com/beta/index.php

    Hello, I'm just looking to get people's opinions on this site.

    Its for our small corporation so it's not intended to be very fancy, just a quick overview of information.

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    Basic, yet functional, with no major issues. You might think it's okay to have this type of site because you're a small company, but I see you're advertising "professional web design", hosting and ecommerce website creation. You're not selling those services very well at all.

    One functional problem I found was that your website design link on the services page links to a directory index page

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    Yes you would be correct it does link to a directory, since this site is not even live yet, I just wanted people to look it over. The SucceedDesigns site is currently in the process of being built. The SucceedServices site might mention what we do, but not aggressively advertise it, and that is it's purpose.

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    I think the site looks nice and clean, but I have to agree, it's not really selling your services to me. I think web design, like print design really shows what class of product people can expect. If you don't use the site to sell yourself, how is a customer going to believe you can provide a site that will sell them.

    The grammar is poor on in the introductory text, which makes it difficult to follow. I would recommend getting that rewritten if that is to be on the live site.

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    simple and nice, but why don't you add a bit more content for your page? IT LOOKS TOO SHORT :P

    progress: HTML: 100% > CSS: 90% > Javascript: 55% > Php:10%
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