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Old 02-12-2003, 01:17 PM   PM User | #1
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alright i have changed my sites layout and name

http://xphp.vze.com

plz tell me what you think


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Old 02-12-2003, 02:17 PM   PM User | #2
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About what?

Any aspects of your site in particular you want opinions about?
At first glance, nice layout, fresh and clean, but on second it looks very code-, script- and gadget-heavy. marquees, status-bar-messer-uppers, sheez...
Furthermore, it looks kinda bland and... well, blue. Little contrast, lotsa blue. A few spots of different colors here and there won't hurt.
Oh, and it doesn't fit a full screen browser window at 800x600 res, mainly due to the large head graphic, which i'm not too keen on either; those tend to overshout the rest of the content.
I hopped around a bit since the main subject (DBZ) doesn't interest me much, and noticed some spelling errors; maybe proof-read the lot thoroughly some time, or have someone else do it (one tends to oversee his/her own errors after a while).

The link list is way too long; slice it up into a couple of categories, and don't show 'em all on every page. By the way: starting out with a "black list" before you even have had a decent amount of visitors is a really nice touch...

One last thing: two popups on every single page got really old, really fast!
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Old 02-12-2003, 02:49 PM   PM User | #3
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after waiting a good 15-25 seconds ( dsl ) i got a
"page cannot be displayed" message ....
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Old 02-12-2003, 03:01 PM   PM User | #4
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after waiting a good 15-25 seconds ( dsl ) i got a "page cannot be displayed" message ....
Same thing here
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Old 02-12-2003, 03:36 PM   PM User | #5
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xph...
/me gets just a done® message with just a white® page showing...n' thattt took just a bout® 20 secs via cable.../me whispers...shes on the boys comp...hehehe...
n' thennn??? the screen just a refreshes® n' says...
Internet Explorer was unable to link to the Web page you requested. The page might be temporarily unavailable.
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Old 02-12-2003, 03:56 PM   PM User | #6
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If I can't see it I can't comment on it! I waited 20+ seconds with a cable model and nothing happens... I give up
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"this page cannot be displayed"...
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ah ha... im getting something now...

umm... four popups on one page is four too many... that is very annoying and i didnt go to any other pages for the fear i would get 4 more...

you need more contrast. alot more. i did not realize my scrollbars were there...

im not a fan of pure red (hovered links) on pages that actually dont have a pixel of red anywhere else (slight exadgeration) and also the overline isnt on of my favourite effects...

the style of cartoon in the header graphic is also not exactly my preferance... and us 800*600 crew dont like scrolling horizontaly

heh. sorry if this sounds so negative... its a great start
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Old 02-12-2003, 09:23 PM   PM User | #9
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works 4 me now 2!

looks good, like its been said, you only need to trim down that top pic. just a little, and then youd be set.

also overline isnt one of my favorite decorations ....
and the red hover kinda looks wierd behind the background.

looks great
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