Please let me know what you think. I bought this domain and added the layout/content yesterday all in about 5 hours so hopefully it's not that awful and can fetch me a small profit.
Ya I had it as a much smaller size and just quickly resized it. I may go back later and try to redo it. Problem is there's basically only one image of the text and I had to cut it out of it which is always a pain :/
I'm concerned about your typographic style.
For starters, the captials are over-used and quite redundant. Use italicization instead, or small caps, and only where they're needed.
Have a paragraph indent and spacing between paragraphs is overkill. I'd drop the indent—the general style on the web—as it seems a bit out of place.
There are too many ads. They're double the height of the content! I can see the point in one of the adsense modules, but three?
Finally, I don't see licensing information anywhere...
Why not find the font for that text and do it yourself?
Are you joking? I'm assuming you just didn't visit the site with such a stupid comment...
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I'm concerned about your typographic style.
For starters, the captials are over-used and quite redundant. Use italicization instead, or small caps, and only where they're needed.
Have a paragraph indent and spacing between paragraphs is overkill. I'd drop the indent—the general style on the web—as it seems a bit out of place.
There are too many ads. They're double the height of the content! I can see the point in one of the adsense modules, but three?
Finally, I don't see licensing information anywhere...
I got rid of the caps/indenting and I agree with you I think it is for the best.
I designed this site purely for the intention of adsense ... err I mean to bring great content to all my fans
Good call on licensing I'm going to add a footer later today with a more prominent link to my site and a disclaimer.
Are you joking? I'm assuming you just didn't visit the site with such a stupid comment...
Umm, you assume I didn't visit the site...have a look a few posts up, maybe you will see a post by me...So pardon me, don't you think your the fool here...
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The only major problem for me is the fact that the logo/banner is of really bad quality. If you improve the banner then I think it will look good.
Well I wondered if you could like, get the font (if there is one), curve it to that shape and add some blending options. May not turn out as good, but worth a try.
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