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I knew I'd find an ironic mistake in there! Also, I think NB takes a colon because it is a word phrase, and I don't see why tautology is a bad thing. Virgil loved it.
Design-wise, it's alright. Have you experimented with a drop shadow or something? Maybe the brown background could look good as a desk texture, which would suit the subject perfectly. It misses a bit of flair, you see. Do the hidden sections have HTML fallback?