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View Full Version : reviews on my first site : zen orange.com



mattz
12-24-2005, 06:03 PM
http://www.zenorange.com/

This is my first site i have put on the net.
I used stricked css and xhtml to create my website, its many for playing games, finding about what i am like, etc.

i hope you good people could review my website for me please?

missing-score
12-24-2005, 06:09 PM
Aaah, you can see me on some of the pictures lol!

Anyway, its very nice. I taught Matt about some basic CSS and floats etc, so i think the outcome is great, and I also like the colours too. And its valid XHTML strict, which is definatley a good thing!

mattz
12-24-2005, 06:18 PM
my friend matt. w a.k.a. missing-score, taught basic html and then taught css, basicly taught me every thing i know

i quite like my design its ok for my first website on the net.

Masterslave
12-24-2005, 07:30 PM
The design is quite simple but I like it.
One thing I don't like are the buttons on the left site of the site, but thats my opinion.
And for the XHTML Strict, good job guy.:thumbsup:

AaronW
12-24-2005, 07:40 PM
I'd say it's darn good for a first. It's good for a second or third, even.

I noticed a few bugs, but they aren't hurting the site too much:

The menu on the left changes depending on the page. I noticed there was one page that clicking "media" would take me to an error page. The other pages take me to the real media page. Also, the games page has one less menu item than all the others (no media page, I don't think?)

That's about it for bugs. As for suggestions, it could use a little more style. The menu itself is nothing more than a bulleted list, but it has potential to be a prettier bulleted list, I think :)

Anyway, that's it for me. Nothing "bad" to say about it, really.

mark87
12-24-2005, 09:09 PM
The design is quite simple but I like it.
One thing I don't like are the buttons on the left site of the site, but thats my opinion.
And for the XHTML Strict, good job guy.:thumbsup:

Agreed, not bad, but those buttons let it down. Far too pixelated and the border (because they are links) ruin them. You need to add a img { border: none } to stop this.

bpeh
12-25-2005, 05:54 AM
hi,

agreed that it is cool that this is ur first job!

I thought its too orange?? header abit plain..maybe its just me, would like to see some graphics that catches attention..

keep coming.

mattz
12-25-2005, 01:29 PM
i haven't made a banner for my website as i' m not good at making them, i know that the media link isn't on every page, the main reason is that i didn't want to go throught every page adding it to the xhtml page.

i can see the problems with the left side menu list and i won't be fixing it as i am currently working on a new website.

so thanks for your comments and merry christmas

evsion
12-27-2005, 08:41 PM
I think the background is a little hurting to my eye. If I may suggest, try using:

#FFFC4A for your BG.

Just my opinion. =)

Good page though.



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