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bazz
09-17-2005, 06:17 PM
erm, I would like you to review this site.

work in progress....
and before I let you see the link, you need to know (I think), that these are the colours that I was to base it on, specifically, those that are in the header image.

here's the link (http://democlient.thechrissystem.com/cgi-bin/business_mainpage)

Constructive views would be much appreciated.

Bazz

PcMan
09-18-2005, 02:12 AM
i dunno wat to say, i am just not feeling it!

harbingerOTV
09-18-2005, 02:57 AM
quick technical note:

your footer doesn't work. Go to Apartments>5 Cedar Mount and you'll see what I mean.

I didn't go into your css so most of this will be just me saying what I think your doing, cool?

The text in the main body is probally the same #color as the H1. Sinc the text is smaller and slimmer it appears lighter. Maybe a tad to light on that background color.

Not too keen on the skinniness of the main text. I have 1152x resolution and it seems to just float out there. too far from the L/R edges. Maybe up the % your using?

When you go less than 800x600 the text crams against your left side bar. Probally not too big of an issue these days but...

The overall apperence doesn't do it for me. The images in the header not all being the same size gets me. I just think it would better if they were. The colored stripes going across them looks odd as well.

The sidebars not reaching the bottom looks funny. Them being two different colors can work I guess but the teal one on the left is, well, teal. Maybe if these were in Miami it would look more in place.

the multiple "welcomes" looks more like a navigation than a greeting. Maybe make it an image and spice up the font some.

bazz
09-18-2005, 02:24 PM
i dunno wat to say, i am just not feeling it!

I know what you mean. :rolleyes: It just hasn't got that - I don't know what - that I would like.



The overall apperence doesn't do it for me. The images in the header not all being the same size gets me. I just think it would better if they were. The colored stripes going across them looks odd as well.


I've need to use the header, 'to keep the main identity consistent', but I think I'l do a new one and see what they feel after the comparison.

I have made CSS changes and I think it is better but, now, I can't seem to get the two (left and right), divs the same length. They are both supposed to be 700px min-height and a given height of 150%. T'works fine with the right div but not, the left. :confused:

changed the teal ( ;) ) to a skyish blue - fresher me thinks.

keep it coming.

Bazz



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