View Full Version : Ok for a first try right?

09-11-2005, 03:10 PM
hi please can you review my site, also if you can tell me an easy way to get it on google thanks guys http://theh2oclan.50webs.com and my email is suneetrulz@hotmail.com just incase you wanna email me anything :) :) :D :D

Single Paradox
09-12-2005, 11:33 PM
reminds me of every other clan site for a computer game I have ever seen. It is alright, but I would change the fact that the navigation is centered, I would have it to the left, and onmouseover have it highlight the whole box, if you understand what I mean.

09-13-2005, 02:32 AM
It's a bizarre combination of fairly good graphics and very shoddy HTML/CSS styling. Looks like a butchered template from templatemonster.com or something. Not saying it is, but that's how it looks. Seems you could definitely benefit from a few CSS and HTML tutorials to make better use of your graphic abilities (assuming you made the graphics).

(This is actually a compliment... Heh.)

09-13-2005, 10:57 AM


It's okay, but as pointed out, does not stand out in any way from other sites.

Check out http://www.w3schools.com/ for some good HTML and CSS tutorials. :)

09-13-2005, 12:20 PM
Oh, whoops. Hadn't noticed the "Template Designed by www.zymic.com" :| Well then. You probably shouldn't have hacked so much off the template. The navigation on the original looked much better.

09-13-2005, 02:10 PM
if it's a first effort I think it's decent, gets the job done presumably and is there to improve on, at least it's clear and legible which is more than a lot of these sites are, I still have almost no idea what's going on though

09-13-2005, 03:08 PM
I have to agree, it looked better before you hacked the template to pieces ;)
Its a pretty nice template (especially considering its free)

09-13-2005, 03:14 PM
Yeah I concur about the nav - What are we really reviewing seeing as the site's design is a template? :p

09-13-2005, 07:19 PM
yeah i know its justa 1st try just took me 3 hours so u know ! but ok cool i myt do another site i do myself ill send u uys the link wen its done just keep your eyes on h2oclan.co.uk and www.h2oclan.co.uk http://h2oclan.co.uk http://www.h2oclan.co.uk :eek: there all the same hahahahaha rofl :D

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