View Full Version : please review

06-25-2005, 08:33 PM

06-25-2005, 08:44 PM
What exactly would you like us to review? Design/graphics/code/content?

Looks like you have some work to do yet, in all of the categories that I mentioned. There isn't much to comment on, and what is there could be improved on. The glowing "my site" is annoying. The light blue links are hard to see on the grey background of the table. The code doesn't validate. Your site content is made up completely of pictures and links. You like paintball? Write about it! You like 4x4? I don't even know what that is, but I'm sure you can go into that and say why you like it.

You have a random bit of code being displayed at the top: --[if gte IE 5.5]>
I'm sure you didn't want that to be seen.

06-25-2005, 08:47 PM
1) Looks a bit dark
2) lacks colour
3) the blue animation doesn't really fit into the site I don't think...
4) Links in table format and not <ul><li></li</ul> format :p
5) Got an error with your IE5.5 hack
6) Doesn't validate (http://validator.w3.org/check?verbose=1&uri=http%3A//webpages.charter.net/jongj/newsite/index.html)

I think the site would look better if it had a better structure to it. What I mean is that everything atm seems squashed together with a large piece of white text spanning over most of the page - there isn't much of a layout.

As Chris says, there isn't really *any* structure to it...what part of the site do you want us to comment on?

Sorry, just being honest ;)


06-25-2005, 11:56 PM
Frames???!!!!! I have not seens frames in years!!!

06-26-2005, 12:11 AM
Frames???!!!!! I have not seens frames in years!!!

You serious? :p

Frames annoy me but I suppose a lot of websites use them...