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DooM_MonkeY
12-18-2004, 01:20 AM
Ok.... this site I have put an embarressing amount of time in... for the effects and everything, I have the colors right, it's just when I try to center it, or format it, the styling gets all funky. And whenever I try to do a list, it doesnt show up. anyway I dont really want a critique, it would be nice, but what im looking for is the reason why when i center it, the background goes all weird (sorry, 13 yr old logic). But i also want some suggestions on my login function... I just did it because i have never seen it done. And now, without further ado! my site! lol...

http://www.freewebs.com/doom_monkey/Effects-Alive_progress.htm

AaronW
12-18-2004, 01:30 AM
My browser (Firefox/Mozilla) shows a cluster of light blue lines and text in the top left corner, and a very large frame creating a vertical scrollbar, the scrolling of which reveals nothing but more of your background...

I don't know why you'd be floating your input boxes, as it seems you're trying to get them to display side-by-side anyway (and you wouldn't have to float them for that). As for the other errors, check this out:

http://www.freewebs.com/doom_monkey/Effects-Alive_progress.htm

It works in IE6, but I'd imagine that's what you wrote it in ;) www.getfirefox.com - Try that, maybe?

G'luck :)

DooM_MonkeY
12-18-2004, 01:54 AM
ok, but the only reason I was floating the inputs is because i wanted semi-transparent background but a fully opaque font... otherwise I would be glad to use the normal way

thnx for the suggestion by the way

bloodlyvampire
12-18-2004, 07:03 PM
i can barely read the text because the font color.Also, i would put the login button on the right side,but thats just a compulsive thing about me.I like the backround alot though.

DooM_MonkeY
12-19-2004, 04:00 AM
to me... the login button IS on the right.. now that is weird... but the text is crystal clear to me also... wat is ur op

Scrowler
12-19-2004, 07:10 AM
firefox loads a webpage which doesn't attract the viewers attention at all, i didn't stop to look, which isn't good. it means that there is nothing that grabs their attention and keeps them reading, i didn't even see any text, and if it was there, it had a bad font colour.

DooM_MonkeY
12-22-2004, 12:03 AM
hmm... this is what it looks like to me:

http://www.freewebs.com/doom_monkey/EFFECTS-ALIVE_scrnshot.gif

(might wanna click the picture sizer button)

But I know it is small and in the corner.... that is why i brung it here to codingforums... i cant seem to position it, and I really dont know why it looks so weird to you guys... plz reply

ronaldb66
12-22-2004, 09:02 AM
Maybe unrelated to the issues at hand -then again, maybe not, I strongly recommend marking up this page properly with html, head and title elements, and preferably a doctype declaration, too.
Although the page is showing up (at least in IE6.0/Win2000), it's never a good idea to make a browser guess what it has to do.

Furthermore, the rest of your markup is really poor; besides the form and input elements, I see only line breaks and spans, and character entities to imitate a list.
Try using div elements for page sections (but don't overuse them!), p elements for paragraphs of text and ul and li elements for lists; you'll get the bullets for free!

DooM_MonkeY
12-22-2004, 10:30 PM
lol i guess the "well made webpages" kinda goes out the window then.. hm nevermind I'll start from scratch, I didn't like it anyway