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squirellplaying
05-18-2004, 01:23 AM
http://www.freewebs.com/squirelplayintag/intro.swf

I'm just starting flash so I need some advice. It will be the intro the troops web site that I am designing. The only thing left to be added to the file now is the enter site button. What could I change about it?

bradyj
05-18-2004, 01:35 AM
http://www.freewebs.com/squirelplayintag/intro.swf

I'm just starting flash so I need some advice. It will be the intro the troops web site that I am designing. The only thing left to be added to the file now is the enter site button. What could I change about it?

The logos are a little low res, doesn't looks so appealing -- the type is a bit boring, and the animate in and out is annoying... do you really need an intro? I find them rather useless, most people don't actually like them -- I used to get offered to do a bunch of them, now when I do flash sites, people ask me NOT to do them anymore -- it's a pain to have to keep visiting the site and seeing it over and over again...

squirellplaying
05-18-2004, 02:21 AM
Alright thanks :). I won't put it on the site. I'll still design it just to practice using flash.

bradyj
05-18-2004, 02:58 AM
check out these sites for some cool inspiration:
http://www.thebestdesigns.com/

Good luck, and post if you have some build questions, I've been doing it for too long :thumbsup:



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