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quartzy
01-22-2011, 12:51 PM
I have a site and would welcome any comments, does the English make sense and does it look right. www.puddypaws.co.uk, is there anything else I could add to it. thanks

oesxyl
01-22-2011, 02:16 PM
I have a site and would welcome any comments, does the English make sense and does it look right. www.puddypaws.co.uk, is there anything else I could add to it. thanks

have a validation problem( easy to fix):
http://validator.w3.org/check?verbose=1&uri=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.puddypaws.co.uk%2Findex.html

i like the site, :)

best regards

Apostropartheid
01-23-2011, 04:25 AM
Taken the liberty of proofing some of your copy.


Welcome to PuddyPaws

I first owned a cat at 21 years old and found a new love in them; now I have 35 years of experience looking after cats. I love all animals, and I believe we should all respect and be kind to every creature, not just cats.

What first led me to start this service was the difficulty I encountered trying to get a sitter when I was away. I started this cat sitting service where I can meet my feline friends every day. It is a pleasure to meet many different kinds of cats, all of whom [note: it sounds better to personify as you love them so much] are unique.


Meggie, one of my cats, looking contentedly at having her photo taken.

We all know [note: inclusiveness is a classic advertising technique] that cats love to be in their own environment; there really is no place like home for a cat! So instead of high pet boarding fees, consider PuddyPaws, a cat sitting service, where your pet will have all its needs catered for with the bonus of being at home with familiar smells and sounds.

As a person sensitive to your cats' needs and with your help in letting me know his or her quirks and routines, I offer a reliable, dedicated, responsible and affordable local service.

Grammar errors in bold, style underlined.

ShaneC
01-23-2011, 06:17 AM
Not bad, the site definitely accomplishes what you're trying to and gets the point across.

My main gripe would probably be the text wall on the front page. It's a bit intimidating (surprising for a cat website). Maybe to spice it up a bit add an image in place of "Christine" that is in a Signature Font (http://www.dafont.com/theme.php?cat=603).

Extra points would've been given for an animated rotating cat head.

Oh yeah, and you also have some misspelling on your Cat Trivia page under Disclaimer:


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