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Holmes
05-20-2003, 02:53 AM
I have nearly completed my first website and I would love some feedback, just remember that the site is still not finished.

http://www.thefinalproblem.me.uk

Many thanks Holmes

Skyzyx
05-20-2003, 04:52 AM
It looks good, but here are some overall suggestions:

1) On your side-navigation, it's supposed to be "News", as there's no such thing as "New's".

2) For the captions on the pictures (i.e. “Professor James Moriarty”), I would suggest dropping the font size down a point or two. It'll help the reader's eye catch them as captions as opposed to regular text. The positioning is good.

3) I'd watch the use of commas, or lack thereof. I'd run my text through Word or OpenOffice.org to make sure my grammar was correct.

4) On the "Website Links" page, you've added three new tabs to the bottom. I would suggest that you either re-work them to look more like sublinks, or you should work them into the main part of the page, to avoid any confusion. As more of a design decision, I'd space those three out a bit.

These are all minor adjustments. Overall, I think the site looks excellent for a first site... much better than my first was.

Another thing to look into (the earlier in your learning of web design, the better), would be standards-compliance. It'd be good to learn the correct way to design, straight from the get-go.

You look like your on the right path. Keep it up!

ionsurge
05-20-2003, 12:03 PM
As said before, plus, a suggestion, try to use css (head over to www.w3schools.com), and for properties, put them in quotes (""), e.g. cellpadding="0" - other than that, pretty good for a first, well done.

Holmes
05-20-2003, 12:25 PM
A big thanks for your kind words and for your advice, I appreciate your feedback :thumbsup:

Many thanks.

Holmes