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intogitar
03-15-2010, 07:02 PM
Hi all!

I have asked here some questions about how and where :)
Finally it is already finished, just neet to add some more information. I made this for free to my friend. Feel free to comment!

http://www.iledebeaute.fi/


Thanks for opinion!

Apostropartheid
03-16-2010, 12:29 AM
Are you aware that it should be spelt ╬le de BeautÚ?
Is your navigation made in flash? That's incredibly inadvisable. I can't navigate your site because of it.

intogitar
03-16-2010, 03:19 PM
Fixed menubar issue.

I know about spelling but here are no such a letters, thats why I used usual "e"s.


What about colors and design? Are they ok?

Apostropartheid
03-16-2010, 06:34 PM
╬ and Ú are not English letters either, but I highly advise you at least keep the Ú (accents on capitals can be ignored in French anyway) on your logo because it gives you that "French feel".

It's very pretty. I suggest the background isn't fixed, though, but stays at the bottom, because it's slightly disconcerting. Your header text should be slightly more defined, maybe with a darker outline than the one you have, because it's difficult to read.

What is the point in the Flash? You can achieve much the same in jQuery and I would be able to use it. And what are the moving bars in the footer for?

intogitar
03-17-2010, 11:10 AM
╬ and Ú are not English letters either, but I highly advise you at least keep the Ú (accents on capitals can be ignored in French anyway) on your logo because it gives you that "French feel".

It's very pretty. I suggest the background isn't fixed, though, but stays at the bottom, because it's slightly disconcerting. Your header text should be slightly more defined, maybe with a darker outline than the one you have, because it's difficult to read.

What is the point in the Flash? You can achieve much the same in jQuery and I would be able to use it. And what are the moving bars in the footer for?

Can you please take a screenshot of background? It looks like here?

http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/9342/screenshot20100316at716.png

I took a look of jQuery and it's very impressive solution! If I only knew JavaScript... so well :/

MattF
03-17-2010, 11:48 AM
Is your navigation made in flash? That's incredibly inadvisable. I can't navigate your site because of it.




What is the point in the Flash? You can achieve much the same in jQuery and I would be able to use it. And what are the moving bars in the footer for?

The bars are for background music, it would seem. Makes a nice change for it to be selectable and not have it forced upon one. :D

I'd pretty much go along with what 'partheid said above. A HTML fallback method for navigation, if Javascript is disabled, would be advisable too. Any type of client side language should provide enhancements only. There should always be a bog standard fallback method for the necessities if no plugins and/or scripting languages are enabled or available.

Apostropartheid
03-17-2010, 06:22 PM
There's background music? Doesn't work for me (thank god). Do not use background music. It's pretty much number one on consumer turnoffs and will drive more customers away than draw in.

jQuery is very easy to implement (I too am useless with JavaScript.) Give it a shot.

sentril
04-01-2010, 07:12 PM
turn off the background music it's annoying. You should add some graphic detail on the right side to balance out the site, it's very heavy on the left side.

myfayt
04-02-2010, 10:30 PM
- The color is very hard on the eyes it hurts.

- You have an extreme about of white space, condense it down.

- There really isn't much content to comment on.

student
04-10-2010, 01:02 PM
Hi all!

I have asked here some questions about how and where :)
Finally it is already finished, just neet to add some more information. I made this for free to my friend. Feel free to comment!

http://www.iledebeaute.fi/


Thanks for opinion!

The background checks are not so beautiful.
everything else is fine.
Try to make the sub-heading darker



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