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yaksho
10-05-2009, 04:56 PM
Hello,

Finally I've hosted my site and it's url is http://uniwebmart.com/roshan
Please check it out and suggest me what can i do to make it more better.

With regards.

masterofollies
10-05-2009, 05:17 PM
Quite interesting, never seen anything like that before. Impressive.

Fumigator
10-05-2009, 05:35 PM
I've never seen so many bits and bytes, accomplish so much, and so little, at the same time. Other than Marilyn Manson MP3s.

Apostropartheid
10-05-2009, 05:54 PM
It's a beautiful site, but I have to say, your grammar and punctuation are simply awful.

I'm going to go through this publicly, so...yeah.

Who do you think I'm ?
This should be "Who do you think I am?". I know that this seems really weird, but you can't use I'm at the end of a sentence like this. Also note the lack of space between "am" and the question mark.


Monkeyman ?? Batman ?? Superman ??
"Monkeyman? Batman? Superman?". No space between question mark and you only use one if you don't want to appear twelve =P.


Wrong dude.. it's me Roshan Limbu - a simple guy with Un - Simple Desire
"Wrong, dude: it's me, Roshan Limbu – a simple guy with one simple desire."[/quote]
At least, I think that's what you were trying to say. Un isn't a word, unless you happen to be French (that'd explain a lot, though.)


I know I'm not any Super hero neither do I have M16 and Bazooka.
"I know I'm no superhero, neither do I have an M16 or bazooka." would sound lots more natural, but very nearly.


But I still save people sometimes with my Desert Eagle ( HTML, CSS ), some black magic ( Photoshop ) and my Kung-Foo skills ( Flash Animation )

"But I still save people sometimes with my Desert Eagle (HTML and CSS), some black magic (Photoshop) and my Kung Fu skills (Flash animation)." Though I don't really like the Desert Eagle metaphor.


Wanna be in safe zone ? Why Hesitate to call me ?

The first bit doesn't make sense. The second bit should be more like "Don't hesitate to call me."

Hope that helped.

yaksho
10-05-2009, 06:20 PM
Really thank you so much for your response and for pointing out my mistake. Thanks a lot. but you know Actually if I had used correct words and spelling Than my site wouldn't be weird.

Any way I'm gonna correct those bugs and host it again. Thanks a lot once again.

Fumigator
10-05-2009, 06:45 PM
So that's what you're going for? "Weird"? You've hit it; Bullseye! Don't change a single thing.

_Aerospace_Eng_
10-05-2009, 09:09 PM
The thing on the computer screen...

Monkey Don't Use Computer
Human Does
Be Human

That sounds funny too.

VIPStephan
10-05-2009, 09:46 PM
So, youíre a web developer, am I getting this right? Then what do you think is this supposed to be:


<table width="999" border="0" align="center" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0">
<tr>
<td valign="top">
<object width="999" height="409" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" data="flash/banner.swf">
<param name="wmode" value="transparent" />
<param value="flash/banner.swf" name="movie"/>
</object>
</td>
</tr>
<tr>
<td valign="top"><table width="999" border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0">
<tr>
<td width="304" height="553" valign="top"><img src="images/callme.jpg" alt="Call Me" width="304" height="553" border="0" usemap="#Map" /></td>
<td valign="top" style="background-image:url(images/tv.jpg); background-repeat:no-repeat;"><table width="100%" border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0">
<tr>
<td height="46" valign="top">&nbsp;</td>
</tr>
<tr>
<td height="315" valign="top"><table width="100%" border="0" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0">
<tr>
<td width="7%" valign="top">&nbsp;</td>
<td width="506" height="319" valign="top"><table width="506" border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0">
<tr>
<td><div id="fadeshow1"></div></td>
</tr>
</table></td>
<td width="21%" valign="top">&nbsp;</td>
</tr>
</table></td>
</tr>
<tr>
<td height="50" valign="top">&nbsp;</td>
</tr>
<tr>
<td height="130" valign="top"><table width="100%" border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0">
<tr>
<td height="50" colspan="2">&nbsp;</td>
</tr>
<tr>
<td height="20" colspan="2">&nbsp;</td>
</tr>
<tr>
<td width="55%" style="font-family:Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; color:#FFFFFF; letter-spacing:1px; font-size:11px; padding-left:120px;">&copy; Roshan Subba, All Rights Reserved, 2009</td>

<td width="45%" ><table width="100%" border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0">
<tr>
<td width="29%" valign="top"> <p>
<a href="http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=referer"><img
src="http://www.w3.org/Icons/valid-xhtml10-blue"
alt="Valid XHTML 1.0 Transitional" width="88" height="31" border="0" /></a>
</p></td>
<td width="71%" valign="top"><p>
<a href="http://jigsaw.w3.org/css-validator/check/referer">
<img style="border:0;width:88px;height:31px"
src="http://jigsaw.w3.org/css-validator/images/vcss-blue"
alt="Valid CSS!" /></a>
</p> </td>
</tr>
</table></td>
</tr>
</table></td>
</tr>
</table></td>
</tr>
</table></td>
</tr>
</table>


Or are you just a graphic designer that thinks he can handle Dreamweaver (although even this can produce more semantic code)?
Furthermore, it would probably be more productive if you put links to the sites/projects you have done so potential clients can get a more elaborate view of what you have done.

Other than that I donít know if your site (and especially the language used) makes a very professional impression. But well, if you get your jobs anyway with such a site then just go ahead.

DK-Tandy
10-13-2009, 11:19 PM
i would be proud of it :), the design anyway, not the code, its in tables :(



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