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rafiki
03-13-2008, 03:41 PM
http://www.jamiewest.org.uk/css/
please be has honest as you like..
cheers
Rafiki

oesxyl
03-13-2008, 03:51 PM
http://www.jamiewest.org.uk/css/
please be has honest as you like..
cheers
Rafiki

- the contrast between text and the blue background is very poor, I hope I'm not rude but in my opinion this blue is hysteric
- invalid html markup
http://validator.w3.org/check?verbose=1&uri=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.jamiewest.org.uk%2Fcss%2F
- no meta tags, why?

best regards

NancyJ
03-13-2008, 03:58 PM
The top of your wave doesn't line up correctly in FF.
The footer cuts off your text at the bottom.
Black text is too dark for a dark blue background
The menu doesn't stand out - not enough contrast on the colours and only showing tabs on the rollover state is a little odd.

In IE7 (less toolbars/chrome) the layout has gaps. In IE 6, its all scrunched up and overlapping.

rafiki
03-13-2008, 03:59 PM
http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.jamiewest.org.uk%2Fcss%2F
i just finished laying it out, its not finished, obviously i posted here for critism on everything, and i fixed the errors now passed validation.

NancyJ
03-13-2008, 04:03 PM
- no meta tags, why?


The site doesn't even have content and you're expecting meta tags?

rafiki
03-13-2008, 04:03 PM
at nancy

Using IE8 and IE8 in IE7 emulation mode, FF2 and FF3b4 I don't see any problems?

oesxyl
03-13-2008, 04:06 PM
http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.jamiewest.org.uk%2Fcss%2F
i just finished laying it out, its not finished, obviously i posted here for critism on everything, and i fixed the errors now passed validation.

the css is also invalid:

http://jigsaw.w3.org/css-validator/validator?profile=css21&warning=0&uri=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.jamiewest.org.uk%2Fcss%2F

I presume is the same reason.

best regards

NancyJ
03-13-2008, 04:06 PM
at nancy

Using IE8 and IE8 in IE7 emulation mode, FF2 and FF3b4 I don't see any problems?

I guess everything must be fine then o.O

rafiki
03-13-2008, 04:07 PM
not saying everything is alright, but just if someone else saidi they see the errors and maybe a screeny then i could know what im attempting to fix

oesxyl
03-13-2008, 04:15 PM
The site doesn't even have content and you're expecting meta tags?

yes, it allready know what content will be there. And I'not talking only about keywords and description, first time I was look have not title, or I'm worng and I don't see it?.

I don't get it is a site review or a layout review, is ready or work in progress? Don't matter how it is, is not a problem, but I want to know what to expect.

best regards

rafiki
03-13-2008, 04:28 PM
Its basically just a review on the layout sorry should of mentioned.
I Played around and the head is fixed, And I'm not sure what to make the color and the size of the font or even the family. Open to suggestions.
Cheers
Rafiki

rafiki
03-13-2008, 05:02 PM
Black text is too dark for a dark blue background
The menu doesn't stand out - not enough contrast on the colours and only showing tabs on the rollover state is a little odd.

Was thinking of making the text in content the golden sunset colour of that in the header image. whatsyour thoughts?

oesxyl
03-13-2008, 05:31 PM
Its basically just a review on the layout sorry should of mentioned.
it's not a problem, I just don't want to stress you with useless things, :)



I Played around and the head is fixed, And I'm not sure what to make the color and the size of the font or even the family. Open to suggestions.
Cheers
Rafiki
I have no artistic skill. If I must work 3 days to the coding part of a site, I'm sure I must wotk 9-12 days to the graphics, but when I'm finish, I just start to cry.
some color with good contrast with black, are #69f, #39f and #09f and are still blue, I guess.
the tabs for menu and menu text color?? I have no idea yet!

- is a white gap between the header and the content

best regards

rafiki
03-13-2008, 05:35 PM
force a refresh on the page im sure your seeing a cached version
crtl + f5

NancyJ
03-13-2008, 05:40 PM
http://browsershots.org/http://www.jamiewest.org.uk/css/

rafiki
03-13-2008, 05:43 PM
strange, i still don't see it in any browser :S

oesxyl
03-13-2008, 05:54 PM
strange, i still don't see it in any browser :S

is a refresh on the page
and take care to expire time, :)

best regards

rafiki
03-13-2008, 07:47 PM
take a look now, i had a lot of help from NancyJ

Fumigator
03-13-2008, 10:08 PM
How have I never heard about that browsershots.org website? That thing is Awesome!! :eek:

rafiki
03-14-2008, 01:54 AM
How have I never heard about that browsershots.org website? That thing is Awesome!! :eek:

Lovin' the feedback :P
only joking fum
what about the rest of you? you checked out the new improved site?

_Aerospace_Eng_
03-21-2008, 06:34 PM
The graphics look like they were done in MS Paint. You need a background image or background color. And if you have the web developer toolbar for Firefox, disable the CSS styles, does the site still make sense? You need some headings for the content.

TS2UK
04-07-2008, 05:16 PM
this is my headerLink a a s dda asd
Link
Link
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this floats right?this is center.this is footer?


all the text is times new roman, black and is - well isn't nice. Mabeys a programming error or something? Or was you just testing



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