View Full Version : Any feedback on a real estate website
05-11-2007, 06:24 AM
I just finished completing this website to be part of my portfolio. Any comments or feedback on improving the site would be greatly appreciated.
05-11-2007, 07:38 AM
But on the main page i notice it says
Ramon will be there to help...
that kind of makes it sound like it is not his website, and it makes me wonder whose it actually is.
05-11-2007, 08:04 AM
i put in a third person speaking point of view to make it sound professional.
However, making it in the first person would make him sound more personal towards the audience...hmm...
Thanks for the advice crunkbbfe!
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